:(

I find it sad when someone looks down on people an much much if it's someone who we know for too long.

Now tell me darling -
was it so you could
feel a little bit
taller?

--- I found this stanza, cute because for some reason I'm imagining a child asking that question while looking up to the one whom she is asking. Though, I can also say that it's a bit sarcastic but then again I can say that it's a curios question with optimism in it.
that's why I love this part the most because however I read it I find different tones.

I did find the poem sad and it was well written.

Though your words are very clear to my eyes, I can sense that there is a veil of obscurity around them..

This made me feel insecure, within because it makes me think of the mistakes I have done without knowing I did.. when you do not intend to belittle anyone (or when you intend). I really like the image: piercing flesh.

It shows how much pain can this look of disparagement do.

Beautifully written, Liz.

This piece is so sad :(

There are alot of stand out lines in this and it made an excellent read. I could feel the pain behind the poem and your stanza's dug into me like knives.

5/5

Liz, I have just finished reading a very sad book, and when I came to read this, It was like reading about the child I just read about in the book. How because she was young, she was made to feel inferior, belittled and treated with disrespect.

A very good piece of poetry as always, simple yet strong
x

It's strange to say something is sad but beautiful at the same time and yet I find this is just that..awesome

This is greatly written,,different and like some have said strange but I love it,,keep up the greatness

My favorite stanza:

now I want to
look at you
as though it's
my last.

But everything is you and great,,,very interesting peice,,I really love it,,I'll nominate it :)

Well written, I love how you ended this poem. I totally agree sometimes we need to let go to regain ourselves. Excellent write and the determination and finality are perfect.

Excellent

Sighs... Liz this is a moving piece.... sometimes in order to live me must let go... this piece touched me...

Wow this is really good........... it gives me hope