Never rewrite a poem of this deep meaning
this is more then jus a poem you dont keep changing and tryin to get it perfect from a writers point of view

its true feelings are heartbreaking pain and it shows in this the tragic lose you have to go through to me this is perfect raw true emotions straight from tge heart

that is the best poem you can get

5/5

Holly!!!! :( I love you and your mom sounds like she was an amazing person. Put one of those flowers on her grave for me please; she raised a beautiful daughter and I wanna wish her a happy brithday also. <3

I can tell your mom was a great and wonderful person. I gave this 5/5. You don't need to rewrite it cause I can feel every bit of emotion from it.

Well hun.. She is always and forever in your heart that is one place she will never leave.. Remember that.. Good write
~10/10~