Comments : I'm scared...

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You will be alright ;) you're strong and full of positive energy

    Excellent write

  • 12 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Excellent, sad poem. Well written.
    I liked this. Full of emotion. Keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by Victoria

    Wow.
    I've been in this exact spot.
    It's hard letting go.
    You will always keep the memories though.
    Stay strong!

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    I like the way you describes your fear here. Very dark and full of emotion. I can see the spark that you contrived in you work here. I enjoyed reading this...so much:))
    5/5
    ~C

  • 12 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    You have described the emotions so beautifully!!
    Letting go of someone u love is never easy...
    Take care.n keep writing because jotting down ur feelings really helps*_*

  • 12 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    You have described the emotions so beautifully!!
    Letting go of someone u love is never easy...
    Take care.n keep writing because jotting down ur feelings really helps*_*

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Thanxs :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Emotionally drained, I can relate so well
    that fear of saying good-bye
    I see lots of emotions plus much energy
    in your poem. Excellent written

  • 12 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    A very heartfelt and emotional poem, loved the flow throughout the poem :) Well done!