Dew Drop Dancing (Rictameter)

by Angie   Mar 31, 2012


Dew Drop Dancing

dew drops
just before dawn
when the sky is still dark
stars one by one turn out their lights
goddess moon rides low on the horizon
as creatures of mother nature
start daily rituals
dancing among
dew drops

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  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Angela,

    Beauty and grace within the words of your poem.

    Hope you are well.

    Warm regards,

    Steven

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Such a beautiful description of early morning! Love the line " stars one by one turn out their lights" so pretty. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ang-

    You have captured a very precious moment in early dawn... Very elegant rictameter...

    "goddess moon rides low on the horizon"

    sighs.... such a pretty line.... the entire poem is gorgeous ~

  • 12 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    An arousing write of things stirring in the early morning ; ) It's simply beautiful!

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