The flow, the wording all above reproach. It gave a sense of hope along with the sadness. An excellent poem as emotions reign supreme

The feelings here are sad, but motivating at the same time. I like the determination to be free and how you said the ice melting and the sun shining. This helps the readers to become in tune with your feelings.

Excellent

Oh I really love this piece.... the flow is rhythmic....

"Dare to live for me
Do what needs to be done
Phase out your winter
And welcome the sun"

LOVE this stanza.... powerful part of the poem....

Not much more I can say but well done.

Jenna,Jenna, Jenna
Your pieces always awake my heart and make me melt.Lovely poem.

I love this poem hun. There is a positive feel to it, as if you are becoming free and facing your fears in life. I think it is wonderful. Your poems are always awesome in rhyming and the flow was beautiful.

I very much enjoyed reading it!!!

Awesome write!

x

This one is my favorite

"For the tide is turning
Spring is on its way
This is my time now
You have had your day "

The ending it's spring time ready to bloom so welcome the sun.