You said...

by Rihanna   Apr 1, 2012


You once told me
You loved me

But all along i
should have known

You were just the
same guy who will
end up breaking me

You said you whould
Love me forever

And yours forever
I will stay
So why are we apart?

If you said forever
Then we can still try

Cause you once
said forever
And that made
me cry.....

*dont know if this is good pls comment*

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  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    The message is sad. Not all things were meant to last babes, you just have to be strong and pull through. Some commas here and there would really make it flow better. This poem is about lost hope and lost love, well written babez.
    Paul-G

  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    Its really good, ya only a few spelling errors but loved the emotion 5/5 <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Some spelling errors but still good :]

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