Comments : Dream

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Good poem! :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very nice poem,
    keep writing

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    What a cute and lovely poem, sad in some ways but lovely nonetheless. Hoping to see more from you.

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I like it except for the end. 4/5