This is so amaging love
It actually kinda sounds like a song

she is purity
she is light
she is everything
the beauty in my sight
she is perfect in every single way
and now i know it was my final day
she said goodbye not to me
but to the air
and i know now I'm second best
and she doesn't care
in sorrow for what was left
in my chest and on her breast
i guessed that you were dressed to confess
my luck now pressed, the final test
in her heart is blessed

^^
I love that stanza and how you kept repeating it like its a chorus(:
So sad it's such a great read

100/100 from me !!

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Aw its so sweet and so sad. i love it. i can see the emotion you out into this :) 500/500

Wow.. this is really long and has a rele good descripton 5/5 :)