I really enjoyed this poem... one thing I'd change is I get the second stanza, but for me, it ruins the flow of the piece... 5/5 either way!

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its really good. i like it

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Very sad and emotional it made me cry. I am like you in the I wish I could change the past. Everyone wants to feel free and leave all their problems behind Excellent write and read 5/5