by Maple Tree Apr 1, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I'm the shadow kissing your tears |
by Naughtymouse
Love love love it, it actually made my heart race reading it, I really like the repeating line and the rhythm of the piece - great poem MT :-) xxx |
by Lioness
You've certainly done well with this format and the poem is beautiful and really mesmerizing with the words. Such a lovely love poem. |
I think this is a fairly difficult format, rigid in it's layout. But you did a good job with the format and the words were beautiful ..excellent |