I like this different look.... its awesome and I really love the detail and descriptive word usage through out the piece, very nice!

The first two lines reminded me of something out of The Lord of The Rings. I liked this image a lot as it is one of my fav movies!!!

As for the next lines and last stanza - It was like love at first sight and then things had turned around in the end and it wasn't for as long as you wanted.

A sad but awesome poem!!!

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