Alice in wonderland, the not so sweet tale.

by Girl of Conviction   Apr 1, 2012


See Alice falling down the rabbit hole,
falling fast hitting the ground, losing all self control.
Seeing herself in a whole new light,
so much more beauty with new added height.

Shes fallen into a place where all hurt is gone,
she feels as if nothing bad could go wrong.
No more cutting deep through her skin,
finally she feels any battle she can win.

Alice escaped the life she was dreading to live,
living day by day with a dad she could not forgive.
Treating her like she was worthless like he didnt care,
living a life that is so not fair.

Her mom just sits there watching her daughter go through such pain,
Alice crying, not one word of complain.
She felt like she had no one on her side,
deep inside she felt like she'd died.

When Alice arrived in this brand new place,
full of beauty, happiness, and grace.
Everyone and everything made her feel important,
when everyone before made her feel unimportant.

She felt like she was on a high,
seeing cats with no bodies that could somehow fly.
She met a man called the madhatter,
who seemed very easy to flatter.

There was a evil queen who wanted Alice destroyed,
Alice thinking to herself "thats the thing i was trying to avoid"
Alice fed up with all the people who ever tried to bring her down,
she found the courage to rise up and take off the queens crown.

The queen yellng and screaming and making a scene,
Alice felt she accomplished something at just being sixteen.
In wonderland, you can make your life what you want it to be,
For Alice all she wanted was to be free.

Free from all the pain she'd felt inside,
feelings of just wanting to die.
No more feelings of always doing wrong,
Now Alice can finally move on.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    Woooooooooooooow i love it so much really enjoyed reading this so well written and so well chosen words 1000/1000 totally deserve it keep on =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Crimson

    Woah this is really good 5/5 from me i love this alot really good spin on the tale of such a sweet girl

  • 12 years ago

    by Noha

    Gr8t work :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    U are one amazing writer. I love all of your.poems.

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I wish that I could rhytme this good, people deserve to know the talent you have, you should enter your poems in a contest, I'm sure you stand a very good chance, this is a wonderful piece, 100/100