The Truth About Time..

by Girl of Conviction   Apr 1, 2012


People always say that time heals all,
not really, not when you've put up a wall.
When you lose someone you really love, time seems to slow down,
ends up leaving you with a single frown.

When you're with the love of your life, time seems to go by fast,
leaving all the good memories stuck in the past.
Time wont give you back what you've lost,
all the happy times just to be tossed.

Time wont slow down when you feel its going too fast,
you ask "how long will this last"
Time seems to go on no matter how bad it gets,
time just ends up leaving you with hurtful regrets.

If only i could turn back the hands of time you say,
but truth is you just gotta move on to the next day.
I wish i could freeze time and just stay in this moment,
but lets face reality that'll never happen.

So cherish the moments you have and never look back,
because time will just throw you off track.
Never regret what could or would have been,
dont give time a reason to win..

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  • 12 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    Loved it. You have related me to my past.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    Loved it. You have related me to my past.

  • 12 years ago

    by tainted melody

    Wow!!!awesome job. I loved the last stanza especially...it really had a lot of power. I am going to keep a look out for any of your new poems :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I like the message behind this, the title drew me in, I was curious and intrigued.
    The flow was smooth, and really good in places, there are a few issues with punctuation, aposrophe's missing and such...
    and this line:

    When your with the love of your life time seems to go by fast

    The first "your", should be "you're" as in "you are", and there should be a comma after "life".

    Such this made the piece a little rocky but content wise and message wise, very nice piece

    Tara x

  • 12 years ago

    by Megan

    This is amazing nice work