Room for Rent (collab with Jenni)

This is a really sweet poem, you both flowed together very nice, lovely written both of you, awesome poem guys

the sweetness in this is just tear worthy, lol its so romantic, and i like the title and how you incorporated that into this lovely piece.

I loved this! :) how you compared love with a home for rent, makes me think of an illustration about a house and to make the house look beautiful you decorate it and when a couple says kind words to the other and shows they love them by their actions each time they do so it is as if they're adding a piece of decor in the home and day by day it becomes something beautiful. Really nkice write, jyou also showed love is self sacrificing but it is a lovely thing, jthe comparison you made here was amazing! Nice write. :)

"Should you apply, no money
is required a simple promise
to maintain it's delicate interior. "

This one says it all! Love ask for nothing and it shows how much love there is by how much they take care of each other.

I really enjoyed reading this poem.

Bowing to the King. Bravo my Lord.

You finally did it :)
Wohooo. that is a magnificent piece of total harmony. The title, the opening and the end are wow!!