Room for Rent (Collab with TJ Becker)

by Jenni   Apr 1, 2012


Available for occupancy
a room for one, enriched
with a rustic western motif.
Secure! your safety is my
concern, your enjoyment
is guaranteed.

It's simply decorated in
romance, happiness lights
the room, while warmth
radiates from every wall
for that special person.

Should you apply, no money
is required a simple promise
to maintain it's delicate interior.

Auspicious accouncement
fullfills my desires completly;
privacy is confirmed and
meeting arranged.

Blown away by the landlord
and his fascinating charisma.

The viewing is delightful,
enchanted by the comfort,
that fondly embosoms me.
Delirious with joy because of
realising that my home is found.

_____
Please comment on his as well :)
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  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Oh, so sweet. I love this poem...a lot, very well penned and the word of choice is great too. The vestige of imagery remains in my thought. Really inspiring, keep it up:))
    ~C

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    This is a really sweet poem, you both flowed together very nice, lovely written both of you, awesome poem guys

    the sweetness in this is just tear worthy, lol its so romantic, and i like the title and how you incorporated that into this lovely piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Lovelllllyyyyyyyyy! I promise I am going to leave a big comment later!

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Very nicely done! I loved how you 2 used the illustration of a room to describe love and how slef sacrificing it is. I thought this write was brilliant between you two. Nice job!

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    "Should you apply, no money
    is required a simple promise
    to maintain it's delicate interior. "

    This one says it all! Love ask for nothing and it shows how much love there is by how much they take care of each other.

    I really enjoyed reading this poem.

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