Beyond The Rainbow (Tanka)

by Meme   Apr 1, 2012


It paints the sky with
ribbons of joy, arching a
colored gate across
the horizon. But you ask
what is beyond the rainbow?

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© Copyright 2012 by: gIrL
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  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Rainbows, I love them. They are girly images sometimes, children love rainbows, this spoke to all those young at heart, as the question at the end was thought provoking...

    a lovely tanka
    beautifully done Meme
    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I think you penned a perfect rainbow. Excellent piece

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh I love this piece. What a lovely poem. It is so vivid and the description of the rainbow is simply beautiful. I love the whole arch and ribbon image.

    I also love the question at the end which made me think as well!!!

    Just lovely.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ohhhh rainbows are my favorite and this tanka is elegant... very nice!!

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