Living dead...
being happy in my sadness...
silent screams...

I love the oxymorons used in this piece.

"in the dark light my blind eyes can always see you
the truth is i always lie"
I love these lines, maybe because I can relate.? lol

It's another great poem. The rhymes were great, I liked the flow and the atmosphere of the poem itself makes the reader want to read more. Great theme, as well. 5/5 :)

-X

Wow :]] very deep/amaazing poem :]

love ur style

5/5

Kool

Oh wow. So cool! I loved the oxymorons.
Every line felt quote-worthy.

Found two (very small) grammatical inaccuracies, however, as well as the lowercase "I" throughout the poem. I as in "I am" is always capatalized. And then there's:

missing the pieces Ive found
^insert an apostrophe there, between I and "ve". "I've".

the Godly Devils final whim
^Apostrophe after the "s" in devils. (If you mean plural, if not it's before the s). Like this: Devils' or Devil's.

Hope it helps.
Once again, *great* piece.

Lovely words, a deep poem which I liked a lot.
Clever use of words.