Comments : My Other Half

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    If I'm a kite, then you're my string
    For you baby, I'll do anything
    If I'm a bird then you're my wing
    For you dear baby, I can always sing
    If I'm a diamond, then you're my bling
    If you're not the queen, then I'll never be king

    << i like how you used comparisons in your poem :]
    its really sweet and beautiful.
    I lovee it :]]<33
    5/5
    Tammi Toxic

  • 12 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    Cutteeeee!5/5