An in depth message you're passing across here. End times are here, God knows best. Let him intervene into this pandemonium we're into and salvate all in shackles of bondage. Prayer is the only key to eternal peace and harmony. So God help us and put us through by his grace and mercies, Amen. All I'll add, is for you to work on your stanzas and wordings as i'd said. And there're tenses issues in your pieces, work on that too. Try and be showing your creative thoughts not by telling. In other words, create simple, unique metaphors and use descriptive figurations to show also. With those suggestions your poems will be great. Keep on writing!!

Thank u! With ur clues I'll be better.

You welcome, anytime.

End of my days i love the title :) 5/5