This poem is so inspirational. The repetition of lines is well placed.

"Let them create havoc in the land
But this you must understand
Surely you will overcome this phase
For, the oppressed move closest to God's space"
I agree with this stanza. There's always hope in the end.

"Until then, light a candle in your heart"

"Fill your soul with the brightness of its visage
Let not this world be a selfish mirage
And if not a candle, a tiny spark
Will definitely, drive away the darkness at large."
Just a tiny spark of hope can truly drive away the darkness.

Great metaphors and the rhymes flowed really well. Amazing job 5/5 Keep writing! :)

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