Wow this is so sad!!!

This girl in the picture cuts her wrists, bleeds out all her pain,
she cries herself to sleep everynight, thinking "what do i have to gain?'

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Fav stanza from the poem
No body knows what she hides inside they only see the outside of her..

I loved the poem
5/5

I have been there so many times. I used to cut I never stopped till I finally was able to get rid of the pain. I have the scars that remind me of the pain. But I don't feel it anymore. Loved it.

Sounds like how I used to write
And also sounds like me/ how I used to be

This was beautiful and it is very true...people always have things going on you don't know about :)

Simple rhymes, yet how you placed them for this poem is special. I like the repetition of the beginning and ending, it kinda made the poem whole. Another great piece 5/5 :)

-X