Comments : Jasmine Flower

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Karla this poem is so beautiful it brought a tear to my eye (I hope no one could see it because I am at work at the moment)
    This really touched my heart. The beautiful words, the flow is magnificent. I love how you have described the love you have for your daughter, the happiness she brings you and how you feel about having her in your life.

    I particularly liked how you described her birth. When she came from you and the drs put her in your arms she was still bleeding - She was crying because she's just been born and you are crying tears of happiness, I love how that brought you together straight away.

    I would love to be blessed with a child and when and if God blesses me with one, I hope that my feelings for this child are the same way you feel about yours. Completely and utterly nothing but LOVE and admiration.

    I can see from reading this that you are so proud of your daughter as well, as if you want to tell the whole universe that this beautiful being came from you.

    An awesome write Karla, simply beautiful.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    What a beautiful dedication to your precious child! loved this piece Karla...

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This might be the most beautiful poem of yours yet. Each one is special but this has an aura of love and warmth. What a lucky girl your daughter is..

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    In mexico when a girl turns 15, we call it a quincen~era... And every girl expects a bit party lol.
    Except me though. But yeah, happy birthday to your daughter on the 25th and this one was a lovely poem.
    That I hope she reads.