Sweetheart please don't. If u needed someone to talk to I am here.

I just want to say that please do not hurt yourself. I have tried to cut my veins also before, although the fact is the world will never understand our pain.
Try to be strong because you can face this world if you truly believe in yourself.
Please take care of yourself.....Please

I was just writing from perspective im not going to hurt myself :]

thank u

I love the use of parenthesis to depict an action.

"Goodbye world, goodbye to the hurt,
goodbye to the people who made me feel like dirt."
These lines stood out to me. A lot of people these days cling to this life full of misery. I have to say I like the pessimism of these lines lol. Another great poem. Writing from a different perspective is a another way a poet writes. Great job 5/5 :)

-X

This was a powerfully spoken poem. And i of course read this isn't how you really feel. Some people don't realize that people do care about them. They basically put up a barrier to thoughts ,actions, and feelings. Their lost in their own world which in itself is a battle within. But that's when they need to open their eyes. People do care and they want to see people prosper. Granted most people these days don't have any affection. But even if it's just one person. Well that should count for something. All in all a nice write. :)

Darling I hope this anit true(:

Beatiful poem Hun
5/5 from me x

Loved it 5/5

I really really love this poem. Its full of emotion, and i loved how you told a story! 5/5 <3 Keep writing!

A lot of people can relate to this poem.

I loved it. Writing about how badly some families hurt people, making them grab the razor and slitting their wrists. You can feel the emotion as you read it. and visualize what is going on in your head.

great job :)
5/5