Comments : Your brown eyes

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Aww short and sweet. Enjoyed the read!

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    Oooh. I love, love this. :) The words are perfect. The man I love has brown eyes.

    "Dazzling your enthusiasm to spend time with me" Loved this line, has to be my favorite. Great way to describe. :)
    5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by Kitty Kurse

      Thank you so much!:) Guess we have something in common huh?;)

  • 12 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    Very good short but sweet poem, i think you could of added i little bit more to it but its nicely written.

    5/5