Your fantasy writes, Timothy, are always thoughts masticating! It's like a bulldozer is speaking. The flow.. the wording, all just make good sense to me. I don't pretend to understand your work; you are beyond creative, man ;)

Yup, I read it many times and there are times when I can picture something but it's not clear yet.
However, I like the words that you have use and the question at the end.