Ceaseless Fears (Tanka)

Such pain and agony painted in a tanka form. Quiet relatable to all. Beautifully crafted, gloomy poem. I hope pouring your emotions out, helped in relieving you. Keep a strong spirit, just know we care and will be their for you in all times. Take care and try and be happy. With love, ;-).

Sensitivity can sometimes be a disease, well-said, Meme. And you have justified that for the sake of never losing the people you love. One could justify that for different reasons.

Beautiful Tanka.. and I hope you're alright now? ;)

Awl of us live in a constant fear of loosin ppl or d lil happiness we hav in lyf...

luv sad poems, n dis one also so well crafted...

keep it up...:)

Its true i loved tanka and u know specially i love sad writing. i always love u poems becuz these are all written the style the language so easy to understand. maybe its becoz i know and understand the feelings.... its good. poem...

nuthing can be worst for u... live happy. good work.. i can see the emotions in the poem...

Meme, This tanka stole my heart, I felt it shatter with those words, what honesty and pain you portrayed in those few lines...
time heals you just have to be strong and remember those around you care.

Love always
xxx