This is powerful writing wow you poured your heart into it and that my friend is what makes a great writer :]]

loved it!
keep writing girl!

5/5

I enjoyed reading this poem from start to finish. Sad with so much emotion. The best kind of poetry straight from the heart with a easy to read flow. 5/5 Ps. I hope things get better with u hun :)

Hey girl, i know things are jacked up right now. and i'm srry you feel like no one cares and the world is crashing down on you. i'm ready to give up on life and say F#$@ it all, but my promise is whats keeping me alive. loved your poem girl, thanks for venting.

Love ur poems keep at it 5/5

Thank you :)