Well written. Memories still remain in the head no matter how or when you left each other.

We tend to pre occupy ourselves with other things but if what you fell in your heart is real, it will still come back to you. Great write.

Thank you for appreciating my work. and i'm just hoping that i can learn more from this site. this site provide me a good stepping stone to become a good writer someday...

Excellent! love this poem...mind to get"if" in this line?:-- i think i can't do this if without you..." rough the flow...much better I think I can't do this without you..

over all it's an amazing piece..so lovely=)5/5