Such sweet sentiments for the one you love. I am sure if they read it, they would know the depth of your love.

Beautiful my lady :) sweet and tender as you seem to always pen with perfection.

Wow, Beautiful Olwin, jus beautiful...great wording, a perfect flow and pure emotions. Great work as always

As Paul and TJ have said, this is beautiful. Really lets us see the great person you are. Enjoyed this a lot :] -Nik

Were you singing while writing this one...coz i was while reading it... :)

Beautifully written, relaxing & refreshing piece. Great write dear.

all the best and take care

There is a touch of a sensual taste to this write that is filled with deep love and passion! I also like the repetition of the last line in each stanza as it reinforces your true love...like the read :)

Lovely love poem of the type I like.
Beautifully penned, I felt every word..

I have nothing to say but a big WOW! You're a brilliant writer, don't you? You're poem was perfectly written...I'm so amazed with this.
Well, deserved to get 5/5:)
-C