I wait for you,
I hear the rustle of the leaves and the movement of creatures far off out of sight.
I hear a soft "thud"-
My heart,
It's weak-
but far more lovable than you could ever imagine.

Your words are full of love and its so beautiful ...this stanza is my favorite of all, because it just held the most emotion, I appreciate this poem because i know what it feels like, and you decribed it very nicely, I couldnt be able to do that, but it was a very lovely piece of poetry , nicely done Kitty.

5/5

Simply beautiful. 5/5