Drown In The Crimson Tide

by Jake   Apr 4, 2012


I've done a lot of things,
That have made you cry.
Yet you love me still,
I don't understand why.

I know I lied,
And lied and lied.
But you were like a true friend,
And stayed by my side.

I thank you for loving me,
Even though I'm a horrible guy.
Brittany I'm sorry I hurt you,
Please forgive these tear soaked eyes.

I love you, I didn't mean to,
hurt you so many times.
But it's just how I am,
I can't change, idk why.

I don't know what I want,
I'm an immature guy.
I'm confused as hell,
I just want to die.

Who do I love more?
Idk I want to cry,
I want to figure it out,
But my brain can't comply.

Cry and Cry,
I won't survive.
I cut my wrists,
And Drown In This Crimson Tide.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    :( i can feel your pain by reading this and seeing how truly sorry you are; the only thing is i would change "idk" ... and i wouldn't use it so much, maybe try to find some better words that might fill those spaces.

  • 12 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    A sad poem, self loathing but I liked it.
    A poem from the Heart.
    Keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    This is really sad but its really good.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    This is a really good poem. . . I liked it a lot, I like dark sad poetry a lot and you've penned it well in this poem. . . . ... There is a lot of self-loathing in this poem and I totally understand that, understand how you can feel this hurt. ...how you can feel like a bad person for hurting the one you love. . . and then take it out on yourself.. this was a good poem..nice work

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    This is a good one deserve 5/5 keep on =)

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