by Faith Ann
Aww sad but good :) |
by Mello193
Pretty emotional. i wouldn't use "idk" though, it rhymed really well and was overall good. |
by Max
This is a good one deserve 5/5 keep on =) |
by Wicked Ways
This is a really good poem. . . I liked it a lot, I like dark sad poetry a lot and you've penned it well in this poem. . . . ... There is a lot of self-loathing in this poem and I totally understand that, understand how you can feel this hurt. ...how you can feel like a bad person for hurting the one you love. . . and then take it out on yourself.. this was a good poem..nice work |
by Angel
This is really sad but its really good. |
A sad poem, self loathing but I liked it. |
:( i can feel your pain by reading this and seeing how truly sorry you are; the only thing is i would change "idk" ... and i wouldn't use it so much, maybe try to find some better words that might fill those spaces. |