This poem is raw and wonderful.... You displayed your feelings beautifully within each line and i just love it!!! well done~

WOW talk about powerful endings!!!
That blew me out of my seat!
this poem is filled to the brim with powerful emotion seeping out of each line!
I really like how you led us through how you once felt and then what you realised about her! it displays self reflection and your growth through life experiences!
Great work!
5.5