I can absolutely relate to this poem. It's the most horrible feeling to lose a friend (or anyone for that matter). Sorry for your loss. It certainly helps to write about it though.

The poem started off at quite a fast pace and then slows dramatically as the tragedy unfolds. Very cleverly written. Though since I must critique, just watch the spelling and grammar. Though the emotion you sured was great.

Take Care,
Alisha

Thnx :) i`m from an another country than my profile says, so i`m not that good in grammar :( But i hope i can be good over time :) Thnx for your nice comment, and the person you looses will always live in your heart and relive in your memories :`)