Interesting... A lot of people go through this emotional trial in life and seriously attempt and succeed in doing so or end up in a mental institution.. To me it expresses a side to those who have no voice and you spoke on how they feel.. Well written. 5/5 :)

Wow very good girl!!

The rhyme was amazging and beautifully written darl
It's so sad thou:/

This girl just wants to get rid of the pain,
shes tired, hurt, broken, and completely drained.
She goes to the kitchen and grabs a knife,
knowing this is the only way to end her strife.

^
Such a sad stanza but still amazging
Knowing that the knife is the only way of releasing her pain :/

Great write girl like always(: x
5/5

Awesome poem! So very indepth with the emotions and turmoil brought about by the struggles so many of us face. Great depiction of the "hanging on by a thread" way of life we encounter when just trying to find our way!! Wonderful job!! Good luck and God bless!! :)

This was a powerful poem, with a lot of raw emotion. I hope this isn't your own battle, but people do need to be aware of how many poeple go through this and end up making the wrong decision.