Comments : My Own Savior

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Wow!! I loved this! Honestly the flow of it and the choice of words were amazing. Also it had real deep emotion that all can relate to. This was a powerful fun! Nice work. Its goin in my favs! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    This poem is amazing!!
    you poured so much emotion into this poem :]
    beautiful<3

    love it<3

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    I thought this poem was great. Told a story. I like how you first brought out how you thought that was the right person but time after time it failed to be so. Then you realizing you have to be independent. But in a good way. As you brought out starting a new in a sense. All in all great write. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Had to read this again ;]
    sooo good!!

  • 12 years ago

    by William Mae

    A very good write, we and love others but it is always ourself who we must trust the most, rely on all the time.