Goodbye

by Light   Apr 5, 2012


Goodbye is to hard to say
See you later is just a lie
My love is like seeds
You throw it in dirt and with water
It grows over time and becomes a plant
Now you're gone still in love with you
Only this time I will be saying goodbye
Goodbye not to say hi or see you later
Gave you my heart with promise not to break yours
Gave you my soul but you crashed with no mercy
Gave you my mind only you become a brain surgeon and destroyed
Gave you my body but you didn't want any part off it
Gave you a kiss but you back up
Gave you my life but only I realized you were just playing with it
But after all that I still loved you
Forgive you because that's how I can move on
Confuse mind with heartless heart
Which one shalt I chose
Tick, tick my heart gave up on you
But my mind wont

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  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    'Goodbye is to hard to say
    See you later is just a lie'
    This is a great start.

    'My love is like seeds
    You throw it in dirt and with water
    It grows over time and becomes a plant'
    I love the imagery you created with these simple lines.. so sweet.

    'Now you're gone still in love with you
    Only this time I will be saying goodbye'
    The first line was sad, you don't want to lose this person, but the following line showed that you're stronger now

    I love the ending.. the struggle with choosing which to follow: your heart or mind. And I love the fact that you did not state which you chose.. Great piece 5/5 Keep writing! Hope to see more :)

    -X

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