'Goodbye is to hard to say
See you later is just a lie'
This is a great start.

'My love is like seeds
You throw it in dirt and with water
It grows over time and becomes a plant'
I love the imagery you created with these simple lines.. so sweet.

'Now you're gone still in love with you
Only this time I will be saying goodbye'
The first line was sad, you don't want to lose this person, but the following line showed that you're stronger now

I love the ending.. the struggle with choosing which to follow: your heart or mind. And I love the fact that you did not state which you chose.. Great piece 5/5 Keep writing! Hope to see more :)

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