Lyfe

Sad but true......im here 4 u .......sorry 4 rhyming:)

I really liked this poem because it was short and straight to the point.

Death taking her grip
eating at my very being
taking all my meanings away
we all lose life at some point in life.

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Taking all her control
Taking away all her life taking everything away.
We all know at some point we lose something in life, everything will be taken from us.

This poem is meaning full
How your saying that at some point we will eventually those something. It was perfect and well written

At the end of the poem were you said
"we all lose life at some point in life"

It whould flow better if you changed it to

We all lose life at some point
In my opinion I think it sounds better

But overall such an amazging poem love<3

5/5 x