I can relate !!

I'm hurting inside I still fake it in the outside because no1 seems to care

Love it girl!
5/5

'You see, my parents see me,
but yet they dont,'
These lines stood out for me. Parents SEEM to know their children, but sometimes they really don't..

I love the flow of the rhymes, though you used simple rhymes. But how you used them made this poem really special. 5/5

-X

The rhymes were beautiful here, you penned a very heartbreaking write......I can relate also to hiding behind a smile- it's easy to do. And we don't have to act strong enough, God will give us strength, there's nothing we can't do with Him by our side.

A very personal and emotional poem- don't give up hope! It may seem like no one can understand the real you, your real identity, but never stop believing you are special and there is something inside you that makes you different than just a "somebody".

Keep writing :)
Also happy early Easter!

Oh my good ness I love this, great job, 100/100, one of my favorites

It's called pretending. Letting everybody
believe we are fine, instead we are in so
much agony. It's alright to let others know
how we feel, often they take our strenght
for granted, and it keeps going on