Comments : For you Sol...

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Very kind and thoughtful words penned here for ? someone special:

    After time even worst pain ends;
    And even biggest wounds mends;
    So try to keep your happiness;
    And don`t give into loneliness.

    If you ever need me I will be here;
    And I will never stop to care;
    So maybe next time You lay awake at night;
    Try to think that You are not alone and it will be alright!

    Keep spreading your love, and one day you may find love yourself. Nice and thoughtful.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kate

    There is a little rhyme in the poem and some of the words dont but it is good. I mean... I dont mean to be mean but there are a few very tiny words missing with some of the lines like:
    "So I`ll always try to make it feel little less bad"
    .... there should be an "a" before "little"..
    Besides the few grammatical errors this is a fantastic poem
    I like how you capitalize "You" and "Your".. it shows the importance of that person
    It's an emotional and deep poem, very good

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Good work, although some words do not rhym with each other such as here and care besides some errors in grammar. I enjoyed the reading!