I totally love this piece Chels; from the use of 'canaries' I can imagine a yellowish, sunny land.. how soothing that is :)

Lovely end, too!!!

I love this Chels. I am always in awe of seeing a rainbow but in your poem there are two! I love how you brought this scene to life. Sometimes nature poems are dull and boring, but this one gives the reader awesome images and leaves me with a tranquil feeling.
Great nature write. Much enjoyed!

Yep, totally "beautifying" piece Chels! The extended imagery is particularly pretty - especially the colours, "shades of turquoise and emerald... violet and magenta" - so warm and cushioned.

Oh my goodness! I think you and Momma nature are twins!!! You took some really creative words here and wrote a gorgeousness nature poem!!! Canary and Citris!!! Mercy mercy mercy so pretty!

What a lovely nature poem. So beautiful and the images are gorgeous!!!

Loved it

x

"Lighting up the sky with
their violet and magenta smiles"

This lines were the ones that stood up the most to me... Violet and magenta smiles, I'm either thinking the lips are those colors rather than the teeth but for my first read I pictured the teeth being that color and that just ruined the image for me... lol

After that I said wait no.. and so I read it again and the lips being that color makes more sense.

over all, Beautiful piece.

Chels, you've done it again, breathtaking... I don't ever remember rainbows being described so eloquently as this before... you've definitely painted quite a beautiful picture with this write!!