Wow this was beautiful! :]
i cant imagine me being there watching him being crucifued :[ it breaks my heart thinking about it<l3
great job!

5/5

I see, this was really imaginative. unique topic indeed. being there at Jesus's death?

You are so right. Jesus had endured much pain, gave his life, our sins were forgiven.
Well written

Wow MaryAnne.
I didn't expect to find this at all!

Such a lovely, faithful piece, reflecting on the crucifying, and I can get a little hint of resurrection at the very end. The method of 'questioning' is really effective in addressing your readers' hearts and souls. I was moved like mountains away. I even remembered the Passion of The Christ movie while reading. So beautiful and filled with pure faith and love.