Aftr reading this one, jus wow..
Perfection achieved

I agree with Average thoughts, this was really good. i don't know if its supposed to be about God, but that's what came to mind, this poem rocked.

Amen to that

This was beautiful!! Was a great dedication to Him. The title drew me in I loved it.

His hands fill a thousand skies
each with the eyes of bounding nations
and His heart-
it reaches deeper than us
onto the windows of our souls
and the stars we are desperate to dream on.

^ Absolutely beautiful! Nothing else is needed to be said about this piece. :)