Faint feeling

by Janis   Apr 7, 2012


I remember this cold, dark nights wind;
It is the one who helps me remind;
Of person I held dear;
And feelings my heart now fear.

This cold and refreshing, yet so painful wind;
No, not the breeze itself, but the feelings it bring;
They are the one who make it rough;
Then I no longer can still feel tough.

I can still faintly hear your soft breath;
When we were lying at nights;
Stars watching at us underneath;
While we slowly close our sights.

These peaceful and sweet moments;
But then there came betrayal and feelings broke;
Which turned our peaceful moments in abyss;
Then again pain and loneliness awoke.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Kate

    Mhm what the other person said!

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Impulses Of Jenna

    Really emotional and raw to read. You held my intrest all the way through. I think you could work on your flow a little but other than that you have an excellent piece here.

    5/5