DEAR DEAD

by lost angel   Apr 7, 2012


Dear Dead,
Don't worry I promise I'll see you soon.
I've lost all the light that was in my life.
No reason for a fight.
I know I made a promise.
One cut,
Two cut,
Three cut four,
How many till i hit the floor??
I went through life struggling, with you constantly in the back of my mind.
You were always there.
When no one else would,
You always tuke my side.
You told me "this is a solution to all of your problems".
You said "take your life and i'll stand forever by you".
All I wanted was someone to care and to be there.
And it seems like this is the only way it can happen.
GOODBYE!!!!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I would suggest you change the title to "dear death"..

    Remove some of the capitalizations as well after commas because it takes away the flow of the poem.

    Overall, this poem is good, i felt you wrote it with the ultermost desire or longing for someone to just be there for you. Death is and will never be a solution to a problem for a problem will eventually die on its own but death is a permanent thing and once you die, you never come back....unless you are a Vampire or something..lol..i loved this piece.

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