I would suggest you change the title to "dear death"..

Remove some of the capitalizations as well after commas because it takes away the flow of the poem.

Overall, this poem is good, i felt you wrote it with the ultermost desire or longing for someone to just be there for you. Death is and will never be a solution to a problem for a problem will eventually die on its own but death is a permanent thing and once you die, you never come back....unless you are a Vampire or something..lol..i loved this piece.