"Because there's no deniying,
There's no one to care."
Change deniying to denying

"With every tear,
Falls a memory,
To the floor."
This is my favorite part. Great imagery, great metaphor, but sadly, I don't like the punctuation. You should remove the commas, that way it'll flow better. I paused with each line, so it kinda ruined it.

Still a great piece, though. The ending was also great.

"She doesn't understand how he could do it.
She thought she was his reason to fight."
He did fight for you. Maybe it was really his time to go.. And he's watching over you in a better place :) 5/5 Keep writing!

-X