I tried editing it for you, i havent changed anything, only made it better i think, hope you like it

Baby, you are so bright,
lighting up my night.
You just don't know
how special you are.
You make my world spin
and it's spinning slow.
Take my hand
and I'll love you.
Love is what you will soon know.
There's just so much I can show.
Your charm is what's so sweet,
your beauty is what makes me brake.
My heart is for you to take.
Baby, you're holding me tight
all through this night.

just collected some grammatical errors.