by Wicked Ways
Wow, I am always amazed at what people come up with when it's a love poem, so when something things beuatiful comes along, you know it really comes from the authors heart, |
Awww, this poem was so beautiful and sweet.. It made me imagine a rainbow and everything you described. |
by Lioness
TJ this is beautiful. You are amazing when it comes to rhyming and it just made the poem flow even better! An awesome job with this write! Loved it completely |
by Decayed
Your rhyming is so unique; some couples were subtle, and I like it that way. |
by Paul Gondwe
Blissful dreamer or romantic fool |
Hhhhmm! TJ, you're a natural romanticist because not everyone can pen a love poem with such evocative, alluring words with lovely metaphors that gets one pondering in daze. I love this poem so much beyond your thoughts. This is one of my best love poems, that i've read and feel inlove instantly. Got me blushing and thinking about myself regards, joys of love. Keep up churning magnificent poems as always and thanks for sharing. You're blessed with this art by God. Bon Travail!!! buddy, Cheers! :-). |
by Illusion
I love this... One day I'll be as good as u guys.. |
by Chelsey
This was so cute Tj! I loveeeee how you took a simple topic of a rainbow and turned it into something so romantic, so magical. |
by Meme
Awwwwww, one of the cutest, sweetest piece you ever wrote. I like the contradictions that some of the lines have, it added an extra depth to the emotions you get after reading this. Got me smiling the whole time when reading it, and tells me what a sincere and heartfelf poem this is. |
TJ, I adore the softness of the piece. I like how you gentley pull the reader in. This is a sweet poem with a lot of heart behind it. I think it is moving. |
by Meena Krish
Blissful dreamer or romantic fool |
by White Orchid
I loved this! It was such a sweet romantic poem kbut what I loved about it was it was different from most love poems and that's what made it exceptional, I loved the line that said lemon drop sun, very clever use of words. But I loved so many lines, it was a very whimsical poem. Nice job. 5/5 |
by White Orchid
I loved this! It was such a sweet romantic poem but what I loved about it was it was different from most love poems and that's what made it exceptional, I loved the line that said lemon drop sun, very clever use of words. But I loved so many lines, it was a very whimsical poem. Nice job. 5/5 |
This was awesome, your creative style really showed in this peice...well written :) this is going into my fav's |
Beautifully and flawlessly written, as always. *_* |